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This week for literacy we had to do short poems,
the black letters in my poem are a part of the original poem but if it didn't make any sense you could change the black words up a little bit and the blue ones are the ones I changed.
The first poem is by William Carlos Williams and his poem was famous.
We had to do our poem on something naughty.
the black letters in my poem are a part of the original poem but if it didn't make any sense you could change the black words up a little bit and the blue ones are the ones I changed.
The first poem is by William Carlos Williams and his poem was famous.
We had to do our poem on something naughty.
I have eaten
The plums
That were in the icebox
And which
You were
Probably
Saving for breakfast
Forgive me
They were
Delicious
So sweet
And so cold
By William Carlos Williams
My version
I have pulled
My sister's hair
That was getting brushed
And which
You were
Probably
Watching
Forgive me
She was
Mean
So rude
And so Greedy
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